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Haun's Mill

 

The following story is the opening eight pages of a much larger screenplay about the final years in the life of the Prophet Joseph Smith, and so appears here in script format. It was first published in Irreantum in 2003 as 3rd Place winner in the short fiction contest for that year.

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              FADE IN:

 

              EXT. TINY PIONEER VILLAGE OF HAUN'S MILL - DAY

 

              The setting is late afternoon, nearing dusk, in a tiny

              settlement set in a wooded cove in frontier Missouri, 1838.

              A watermill turns slowly, driven by the quiet flow of a slow

              river. Although ledges of ice and patches of snow hang into

              the river, a number of children play on the banks while

              women wash and rinse clothing nearby. The women talk amiably;

              the children giggle and tease, tossing pebbles, floating

              sticks.

 

              A SUPER READS:

 

              "HAUN'S MILL, NORTHWESTERN MISSOURI, OCTOBER 30, 1838"

 

              AMBIENT SOUND ONLY

 

                                                       INTERCUT TO:

 

              TIGHT SHOT

 

              Horses, moving quietly yet steadily, almost as if in a march,

              down a shaded trail. Horses go by, revealing boots of riders,

              dozens of them, one after another after another.

 

                                                       INTERCUT TO:

 

              THE VILLAGE

 

              Above the mill a large pile of fresh dirt reveals labor

              underway. Men are gathered around, their breath showing in

              the crisp fall air. A change of angle allows us to peer into

              a deep hole, six feet in diameter and a good twelve feet

              deep. JACOB HAUN, 40, and his 16-year-old son, WILLIAM HAUN, are              in the hole, digging. We get a good look at Jacob, who speaks:

 

                                  JACOB HAUN

                        Take it!

 

              Two men on top begin to pull a rope leading through a pulley

              hung from a hoist arranged over the hole. A large bucket

              filled with dirt emerges and the men dump it on the growing

              pile. Then they return their hands to their pockets for

              warmth.

 

              BACK TO HORSES

 

              THE HORSES are restless, prancing and blowing clouds of steam

              in the cool air of dusk. The sound of a DOG BARKING can be

              heard in the distance.

 

              A wider shot reveals the riders, all men, carrying guns;

              heavily armed, grim faced, focused.

 

              Again, six, eight, ten go by. The shot is too narrow to see

              the full extent, but we can't help but wonder, "how many are

              there?"

 

              VILLAGE

 

              A wider view of the village shows it a tiny thing, barely

              sprouting from the ground. The shack-houses are neat, but

              clearly built in some haste, and from the limited resources

              of poverty. Within the unchinked-as-yet log walls of a

              building adjacent to the mill, one man, WARREN SMITH, 36, works

              the implements of a farrier's trade, shaping something on

              an anvil. Two young boys, SARDIUS SMITH (10) and ALMA SMITH

              (8), play hide and seek around tools and apparatus of

              the shop.

 

              Assorted activity occupies our view, the sounds of fun and

              industry our hearing.

 

              Off screen a DOG BARKS again. Little Alma breaks off from the

              chase and calls for his dog from the doorway of the

              blacksmith shop.

 

                                  ALMA

                        Pirate! Come here, boy! C'mon.

 

                                  WARREN SMITH

                               (To the older boy)

                        Sardius. Hold this for me. C'mon.

                        Now keep it level.

 

              Sardius moves to help his father as the dog barks again,

              twice, this time clearly agitated. Alma continues to look for

              his dog.

 

              HORSEMEN

 

              Now a widening shot reveals the extent of the approaching

              militia, more than 300 men and horses, all armed, gathering

              into a meadow. A single uniformed man, CAPTAIN WILLIAM O.

              JENNINGS, late fifties and coarse looking, parades haphazardly

  at the front of the crowd. At his side and following him closely is WILLIAM    REYNOLDS, 40ish, wearing a uniform shirt, but dungarees and boots.

 

                                  JENNINGS

                        Your mission is clear, men. The

                        squatters on the river are

                        occupying land that belongs to the

                        citizens of Missouri. They have

                        come here without invitation, and

                        they will leave without farewell.

                        The Honorable Governor of the

                        state has spoken. Now enact your

                        duty.

 

                                    REYNOLDS

                         Rogers, lead out!

 

              JACOB ROGERS, 38, determined and smiling, lurches his horse

              forward, and the others fall

              in behind, rapidly, urgently, in a line that fills the road

              and spills into the woods for 30 yards on either side..

 

              TITLE READS:

 

              "A TRUE STORY."

 

              VILLAGE POV

 

              Alma runs along the small river, bouncing a stick on the

              rocks as he moves. AMANDA SMITH, 33 and pretty, rises up from

              the stream with a load of wet clothing and moves off toward

              her cabin. Alma runs past her, following his dog, who has

              stopped at the crown of the hill, his hair bristling. Amanda

              calls out to Alma.

 

                                  AMANDA

                        He's okay, honey. Let him run.

 

              As she turns to watch Alma move toward a rise on the wagon

              road that enters the village, Jacob Rogers moves quickly into

              sight out of the woods. He is followed immediately by two

              more riders, guns at the ready, then the entire force begins

              to pour over the rise. The dog scrambles for cover and Alma

              runs back toward the village.

 

                                  AMANDA

                               (continuing)

                        Alma!

 

              Amanda runs out to grab Alma by the hand and then runs back

              toward the village.

 

                                  AMANDA

                               (continuing)

                        Warren!

 

              All the villagers look up now at the approaching militia.

              Amanda rushes Alma to the blacksmith shop and shoves him

              inside. Then she turns and screams for another child.

 

                                  AMANDA

                               (continuing)

                        Elizabeth! Elizabeth!

 

              She sees ELIZABETH, 5, by the river and runs to her, where other

              women are rising from their work, gathering children, who

              have frozen in their play. Men scramble away from their work

              to face the horsemen. Rogers kicks his horse forward and

              raises his musket. The line of horses begins to stream past

              the well and fill the little village.

 

                                  MAN AT WELL

                        What do you want?

 

              He is shot in the chest in response, falling half into the

              well. The balls begin to fly. Women, grabbing children, pound

              back across the stream, running for cover of the woods. Most

              of the men run for the mill or the blacksmith shop.

 

                                  HAUN (FROM WITHIN THE HOLE)

                        Hey! What's happening?

 

              Haun emerges from the hole only enough to be knocked back

              into it by the passing hoof of a horse. He falls in to the

              well where his son catches, then cradles his body, in

              absolute fear.

 

              Balls are flying everywhere, more than 60 riders now in the

              village. Women and screaming children are shot

              indiscriminately. Men are bludgeoned and shot. 100 riders in

              the village, some dismounting and pummeling men with the

              butts of their muskets, some chasing the women into the

              woods, laughing, whooping, as they drag some down, ripping

              their clothing. Two dozen men are poking their muskets

              through the gaps in the blacksmith shop logs and firing over

              and over at the men there who are attempting to fight off the

              muskets with iron working tools, pokers, brooms.

 

              Several riders in the village are holding back, unsure of

              what to do, clear confusion on their faces.

 

                                  CONFUSED RIDER

                               (Yelling to Jennings)

                        These are women and kids, Captain!                         

                        Lord Jesus, we're killing kids!

 

              One rider, about 18 years old, leans over the neck of his

              horse and throws up. Others are pulling back into the woods,

              clearing out.

 

              Reynolds drives his horse right up to the door of the

              blacksmith shop and peers in. The gunmen move off, their work

              completed.

 

              Outside, they begin to strip the dead and dying, taking

              watches, checking pockets, etc. Some poke at the dead with

              their guns, testing their prey. Jacob Rogers rides up to 60-

              year-old THOMAS MCBRIDE, lying on his back, gut-shot, and

              demands his shotgun, which is laying over his wound.

 

                                  ROGERS

                        You're supposed to be unarmed,

                        squatter. Your "prophet" signed a

                        treaty.

 

                                  MCBRIDE

                        Take it.

 

                                  ROGERS

                        Why, thank you. Reckon I will.

 

              Rogers dismounts, takes the gun, turns it on the old man and

              fires. He then mounts up and rides away.

 

              INSIDE THE BLACKSMITH SHOP

 

              The light is dim, but we can see that William Reynolds has

              entered the blacksmith shop, still mounted, and is picking

              his way around the bodies when he sees the two boys clinging

              to their father, who is trying to keep them silent although

              he is bleeding and in pain. Reynolds shoots the man, then

              turns the gun on Sardius and fires again, splattering Alma

              with the debris. Alma continues to hold to his father's leg.

 

              Another man, MURPHY, steps into view, dismounts and speaks but weakly

              at Reynolds.

 

                                  MURPHY

                        God, Bill, he's just a damn kid.

                        Let him go.

 

              Reynolds looks at Murphy, as if he's considering his logic,

              and spits tobacco without regard. Then he re-aims the gun at

              Alma.

 

                                  REYNOLDS

                               (As if he's sorry)

                        You can see his poor daddy's dead,

                        Murphy. And probably his mama,

                        too, about now. Little nits grow

                        up to be lice.

 

              Reynolds shoots Alma (it appears to be a gut shot), spits

              again, and rides out of the building.

 

              OUTSIDE

 

              Outside the only ones moving are the militia gunmen,

              stripping the dead, firing rounds into those still breathing

              or even those long gone.

 

              Several gunmen are coming back out of the woods on the far

              side of the stream; one, 25ish, is force-dragging Amanda

              Smith, one hand wrapped tightly into her hair, another at his

              side holding a pistol. She is battered and holding her ripped

              dress up over her upper body, but oddly silent and uninvolved.

 

                                  VIGILANTE

                        Looky here, fellas, I got me a

                        live one. There'r several back

                        yonder still kicking if you're

                        interested. And some that aren't

                        if'n that's more to your taste.

 

              Reynolds rides out into the open, where Jacob Rogers is just

              sheathing his knife. One man is sitting on the ground,

              holding his head, having clearly been sick. Reynolds just

              bumps right through him on his horse.

 

              Captain Jennings rides up and watches the woman with

              interest.

 

                                  REYNOLDS

                               (to Jennings)

                        This is a piss poor lot of

                        soldiers you got here, Captain.

                        Crap their pants at the sight of

                        blood.

 

              Jennings mounts his horse, spits. Other men move toward their

              horses. The vigilante approaches a group of them where,

              laughing, they begin to pass Amanda around among them,

              groping, acting romantic. She is powerless, near catatonic.

              She can only stare toward the blacksmith shop, her eyes

              vacuous.

 

                                  JENNINGS

                               (To the crowd)

                        Let her go.

 

                                  VIGILANTE

                        Ah, c'mon, Captain. You can see

                        she likes me. She needs me.

 

                                  OTHER MAN IN CROWD

                        Maybe she needs all of us!

 

              Laughter.

 

                                  JENNINGS

                        Mount up.

 

              Jacob Rogers mounts his horse and moves toward the road.

              Reynolds holds back watching Jennings, but other marauders

              begin to ride out of the village. In the background of the

              shot, the Vigilante pushes Amanda away from him and

              aims his pistol at her, but just fakes the shot and holsters

              his weapon. She falls to her knees, then to her hands, and

              then falls prostrate in the dirt.

 

                                  REYNOLDS

                        Now what? Does Boggs expect us to

                        shoot every damned Mormon in

                        Missouri?

 

                                  JENNINGS

                        That he does, Mr. Reynolds.

 

              The dog, Pirate, is sneaking back into the village, his

              hackles up, his lips curled in fear and anger. Jacob Rogers

              fires once, wounding it horribly but not killing it. He

              saddles his gun and rides off.

 

                                  REYNOLDS

                        There's about 5,000 of them in

                        Caldwell County alone. How're we

                        supposed to do that?

 

              The general exodus of the village proceeds, Rogers at the

              head.

 

                                  JENNINGS

                               (Casually)

                        One at a time.

 

                                  REYNOLDS

                        I say we shoot their damned

                        prophet and they'll all just fade

                        away, go back to New York, or

                        wherever they run them out of last.

 

                                  JENNINGS

                        I'll just do what the honorable

                        governor tells me.

 

                                  REYNOLDS

                        And what'd he tell you to do with

                        Joseph Smith?

 

              Jennings spits, and looks at Reynolds directly.

 

                                  JENNINGS

                        Hang him.

 

              Reynolds holds the stare, then, breaking eye contact for only

              a second, turns his head and spits tobacco at a body, hitting

              it square in the back of the head.

 

            Reynolds ‘hmphs’ in satisfaction, then looks up to admire the

            beautiful day, the clearing sky, the colors of autumn.

                       

                                  REYNOLDS

                               (Smiling)              

                        Hell of a day, ain’t it, Captain.

                                                                                                           

 

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